Script Draft

Erm following is script Draft 1, a collation of what we discussed and a grp of us wrote, and edited by me:

Scene 1
Setting: Dark Alley with some garbage bags.
(Yijun walks along a dark alley, suddenly loud footsteps are heard.)

Jean: (slaps Yijun) You seriously don’t look attractive, like us. (laughs) I don’t see what Dave/Dexter sees in you. Anyway, he sent us here as he doesn’t want you anymore.
Yijun: (Falls and scream.)
Joan: No wonder he has us here to settle you. Don’t blame us— blame it on your looks. Yes you might be young, but the rest? Hah. He has gotten over you, so give up, young girl.
(Continue kicking, slapping and punching).
(Hanzhi can u add the missing part here?)
(Ambulance Sound)
Yijun: (Miserable and desperate) Why? Why did he do this to me? He used to say he love me and that I was his only one. He lied to me, no, to us. Why did he send his girlfriends to do this to me? No, no, he loves me right? Why aren’t you talking to me? I no longer know why.

Yeah thats scene 1.

From, Siew Ting (24).